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sMoKe WeEd ErRyDaY by koda-kuma sMoKe WeEd ErRyDaY by koda-kuma
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:iconfoxstars:
ok u want a cric okay

So you want to work on the feet, that looks like she twisted so try bending the toes more. The neck looks like shes being choked so you might wanna make it a bit more turned and a little thin thicker. You should also try putting more clothes lines so it looks more detailed. The nose looks great and so does the hat. Now to shading. You should try putting more of a light source it looks like you just shaded all over the place and theres no light whats so ever. For the cigarette in her mouth (?) try going on a new layer and adding smoke a light grey. I hope this helps. ^^ <3
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Okay so, I don't usually critique friends' stuff but I'm bored and ye.

Pros:
Your feet anatomy is pretty good, the hair and eyes are good, too.
I also like her facial expression.

Cons:
Her anatomy is a bit off.
Her sweater needs to look more fabric-like around the neck area, it makes her neck look a bit too tall and/or fat.
Her legs are a bit odd-shaped, you have the right idea, but they're a bit uneven and need to be touched up a bit.
The feet need to be placed evenly on the ground, or the right foot needs to be moved up, due to the leg positions.
Her right leg looks like it's coming out of the left, try making them a bit curvier on the thighs.
Her elbows are too low, move them up so the top half of the arm isn't so long.
Her face is positioned a bit too low on the front of the head, she's got a really big forehead, move it up to where the bands are covering at least half of both eyes.

And not sure on this one, but if you want that pants look, try making the end of them folded as they meet the shoe, but if the shoes are over the pants, then try making the hole of the shoe flare out a bit.

That's all, hope this helps <3 vuv
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pandamoniama Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
did you even try
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:iconfoxstars:
foxstars Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
dude flea, thats a bit rude.
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koda-kuma Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah. Took me about two days to do this.
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GalaxySharks Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, as a matter of fact SHE DID

She asked for critiques, not rudeness. It's not like your art is any better than hers is.
Keep your rude comments to yourself, they aren't needed here.
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pandamoniama Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
butthurt
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Wintersnugglez Jan 1, 2013
ヾ(´・ω・`)alright' wow. i have a question for you, why are you taking you time just to say ''did you even try'

No ones being butthurt about anything really. No one in art is perfect. And mister is still learning anatomy and all of that siht
The best thing is that you just wasted ur time commenting on this work. But the rude comment was un-needed

Just please stop picking fights, its really childish
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R-C-R Jan 1, 2013   Artist
Butthurt?

No, you're just flat out rude and it's just not your place to comment like that :I
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R-C-R Jan 1, 2013   Artist
Okay, rude.

Yes, she did.

It's not her fault if she's not this ~*~*~*~OMG AMAZING~*~*~*~ artist, I'm not either.

It's not really your place to ask something like that. :I
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pandamoniama Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
k
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ooblat Jan 2, 2013
immature response too
you could have at least taken responsibility for your actions in being so rude over this
you could have given a legitimate critique too instead of being so flat-out blunt and rude
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